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06 February 2010 @ 05:04 pm
[one-shot] You belong with me  

Title: You Belong with me [one-shot[]
Author: bakanishi08
Pairing: Kamenashi - Akanishi [akame for short] 
Rating: PG
Genre: romance
Disclaimer: my first song-titled fic. hope you liked it.
~ inspired from "you belong with me" by taylor swift.
Summary: well, if you know the lyrics of the song, then that's it :) ..then read it?

You're on the phone
With your girlfriend
She's upset
She's going off about
Something that you said
She doesn't get your humor
Like I do

*Jin's P.O.V.*

"Baby, can you please calm down. It was a joke. I'm sorry." I said to Maki, my girlfriend.

"I don't know why you would say something like that to me." she said.

"I didn't mean it, I'm sorry can you please forgive me."

"I have to think about it." she said and hung up.

"Ugh....girls are so emotional. I just said her hat looked funny and she made it
into a huge deal and she doesn't even know if she can forgive me." I complained to Ryo.

"Wow dude, that sucks."

"I know that captain obvious."


*hangs up*

I laid down on my bed and thought about it.

But then i saw Kazuya.

"Is she mad again?" she asked me, showing her drawing book. as always.

"yeah, she always does" i replied bak, by writing to my drawing book, too.

"it's ok, as long as you love her with the same way she does."

" :) "

" *hugs* it'll be ok.. "

" *hugs back* you made feel alright.. thanks :) "

"really? your welcome :) "

*Kazuya's P.O.V.*

I'm in my room
It's a typical tuesday night
I'm listening to the kind of music
She doesn't like
She'll never know your story
Like I do

Its Tuesday and I was sitting on my bed doing my
English homework and listening to some altern.
I started thinkning about Jin and how me and him are so alike.
But then I started thinking about Maki
and how much I hated her and how her and Jin had absolutely nothing in common.
The thing is I've liked Jin since freshman year
and thats when I started liking him and now were already seniors.
I pretty much know everything and anything about him.
Maki is a transfer student.
She came last year.
She and Jin just started going out like last month.

But she wears short skirts
I wear t-shirts
She's cheer captain
And i'm on the bleachers
Dreaming about the day
When you wake up and find
That what you're looking for
Has been here the whole time

The next day I walk into school and I see Maki by her locker
and I wonder why Jin likes her more than me.
Soo I start by what we wear. She has a tank top, short skirt, flats,
perfect curls in her hair, makeup and jewlery.
I look at my clothes. I have a band tee, skinny jeans, converse,
plain straight hair, eyeliner, and a 3oh!3 dog tag.
I keep walking to my locker and I see her hugging everyone of her cheer friends.
There's another thing, at the games I sit on the bleachers not even paying attention to the game.
After school I go home and do what I normally do.
Homework, shower, dinner, relax, then sleep.
Every night I dream that Jin will one day realize how perfect me and him
are for each other and how I'm never going away.

If you could see
That i'm the one
Who understands you
Been here all along
So why can't you
See you belong with me
You belong with me.

*Jin's P.O.V*

Maki forgave me, but I've been thinking about how different me and her are.
For some odd reason I've been thinking about Kazuya alot more lately.
I think she's better for me and I really like her.
I think that my feelings for her have been in me all along but I've never really paid any attention to her.

Walking the streets
With you and your worn out jeans
I can't help thinking
This is how it ought to be
Laughing on a park bench
Thinking to myself
Hey, isn't this easy?
And you've got a smile
That could light up this whole town
I haven't seen it in awhile
Since she brought you down
You say you're fine
I know you better than that
Hey whatchu doing
With a girl like that?

*Kazuya's P.O.V.*

Me and Jin were walking around town, hanging out and having a good time.
I could tell he was hyper and he pulled me over to the park bench.
I couldn't thinking about how perfect this would be if me and him were together.
I know Jin has been sad the past few days but I don't know why.
Maki forgave him, but since then hes been acting weird.
But its also a good thing to have him happy and smiling again.
His smile makes my heart melt and I just fall harder for him.

"Hey Jin, what's been up with you the past couple of days? You seemed to be really upset."
I said while we were sitting on the bench in silence.

"Umm nothing. I've just been thinking about everything and it's kind of getting me down, but I'm fine."
I could tell he was lying.

"I have a question."

"Shoot." he said staring at me.

"Did Maki do something?" he nodded,
"Why are you with her if she makes you feel this way?" I asked.

"I don't know."

"Jin you don't deserve her. You deserve way better than her." I said looking down.

She wears high heels
I wear sneakers
She's cheer captain
I'm on the bleachers
Dreaming about the day
When you wake up and find
That what you're looking for
Has been here the whole time
If you could see
That i'm the one
Who understands you
Been here all along
So why can't you
See you belong with me
Standing by and
Waiting at your backdoor
All this time
How could you not know
You belong with me

I've been going crazy the past few days.
I haven't talked to Jin since the day at the park and I miss him.
I just wanna talk to him thats it.

*Jin's P.O.V.*

"Jin~ we need to talk." Maki said.

"Okay, about what?"

"I think we should breakup."

"What? Why?" I asked confused.

"I dont like you anymore." she said and walked away from me.

I was angry but then I was actually relieved. Now I could tell Kazuya how I felt.

Oh, I remember
You driving to my house
In the middle of the night
I'm the one who makes you laugh
When you know you're about to cry
And I know your favorite songs
And you tell me about your dreams
Think I know where you belong
Think I know it's with me

*Kazuya's P.O.V*

I was listening to my music again when I heard something hitting my window.
I went over to it and saw Jin sitting on the tree right outside.
I opened my window and he was smiling. He jumped in my room.

"Maki brokeup with me." he said in sad voice.

"Jin~kun I'm sorry." I said.

"There's nothing to be sorry about. i'm just  little upset."

"it's ok" I said and hugged him.

few days passed, i still didn't see him.
i'm worried about it..
So i decided...

You belong with me
Standing by here, waiting at your back door
All this time how could you not know baby,
You belong with me
You belong with me
Have you ever thought just maybe
You belong with me

*Jin's P.O.V*

will she going to the prom? ..uh, better to ask her.
i was going to Kazuya's house when i suddenly saw her,
at my backdoor.

"are you ok?" she asks.

"yeah, aren't you going to the prom?"


"pleese come..."

"i'm not sure about it.."

"i'll wait for you."


*Kazuya's P.O.V*

i made up my mind. ok, i'm going.
as long as he's ok now, and besides, he's going to wait for me...

I wear the preetiest dress i have. my mom helped me to put
make up, to curl up my hair. my mom handed me contact lense
it was so pretty.

"Dad! drive me to schoool!"

"Goodluck my dear," my mom said as she waves and say goodbye.

At Last. I'm here.
my heart is pounding really fast.
everybody is looking at me,
and Jin, held my hand.
We started to dance.

"you look really beautiful tonight.. thanks for coming" he said, while staring at me. directly.

"and so you are.."

"oh, before i forgot, i have something to show you"

"ehh? what?"

the fireworks started to gaze up on the sky.
it was really beautiful.

Jin  came closer to me and pulled my face close to his and kissed me.
I was in shock at first but then after a few seconds I started kissing him back.
I pulled away from him and smiled.
He smiled back at me and said "I finally realized that I belong with you."




my first song-titled oneshot.
thanks for reading~ please do drop comments~~
maybe i'll post this to other communities tomorrow
with my beginning a new life with you chapter 9...
please wait for it..
and i'm also working on the last chapter of
my "Longing to be with you" and my
"jinjin is not innocent anymore" ~~

i hope you like this story~ ^^

BTW i've updated "begginning a new life with you"
reader/Jin akanishi fic here to read it <3
♡i am♡: cheerfulcheerful
♬♪i'm listening to♪♩: KAT-TUN - D-MOTION
diisa_pinky: akame-03diisa_pinky on February 6th, 2010 08:54 am (UTC)
it's sweet~~~ :DDD
makes my heart go doki-doki remembering my bf now xD
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on February 6th, 2010 09:29 am (UTC)
ahehe~ thanks for reading and commenting~
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bakanishi08bakanishi08 on February 6th, 2010 09:30 am (UTC)
thanks for reading and commenting~~~^^
♥bambi♥phieping28 on February 6th, 2010 10:36 am (UTC)
...soo cute!! hihihi ^__^ love it!!! ♥
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on February 7th, 2010 12:14 pm (UTC)
hey~~ thanks for reading and commenting!
palagi aman ee -_<^^
(no subject) - phieping28 on February 8th, 2010 01:15 am (UTC) (Expand)
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bakanishi08bakanishi08 on February 7th, 2010 12:14 pm (UTC)
you commented again^^ xDD
dontstopmoredontstopmore on February 8th, 2010 01:45 pm (UTC)
aww this was really sweet!
and it really went well with the lyrics=)
gd job!
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on February 10th, 2010 02:25 am (UTC)
nur_amynur_amy on February 8th, 2010 02:26 pm (UTC)
hi there, i have always like that song and to think you made it out to be a fiction with Jin and Kazuya starred in it just make me love the song. :)

Can't say much but just one word, SWEET!

Thanks for writing. ^^V
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on February 10th, 2010 02:25 am (UTC)
thanks for reading and loving the song... ahaha :)
acchan |あっちゃん: kamegayhibinoasami on February 8th, 2010 02:30 pm (UTC)
cheesy !!!

and u know crazy akame fangirl always love cheesy stuff ~~ xD

thank u for writing ^^
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on February 10th, 2010 02:26 am (UTC)
yeah akame fangirls always love cheeesy stuffs^^
thanks for reading and commenting^^
Pika Pika ぴょん..: breathlessshapika on February 8th, 2010 02:33 pm (UTC)
wow. i hate that song before this.
but now i guess..
i somehow like it already.

bakanishi08bakanishi08 on February 10th, 2010 02:27 am (UTC)
glad you likeed it^^
dazehydedazehyde on February 8th, 2010 02:38 pm (UTC)
Aww... this is really sweet~
Thanx for writing & sharing dear... ^^
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on February 10th, 2010 02:27 am (UTC)
thanks for reading tooooo^^
アグスティンagustin1982 on February 8th, 2010 04:45 pm (UTC)
[one-shot] You belong with me
I loveeeeeee it>
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on February 10th, 2010 02:27 am (UTC)
Re: [one-shot] You belong with me
thank you~ ^^
glad you looovveeee it^^
Mandy -Dominic- Grahammastrmanipul8r on February 8th, 2010 05:49 pm (UTC)
Hi hi~! Cute Girl!Kame fic you have here!

One inconsistency though...Who's Britney? It was mentioned in that part where Jin and Kame were talking about their fight...

Ah, still a cute fic though. Good job! :D

P.S. The mods at Akame_ haven't gotten to you yet, but they're going to ask you to take it down since it's not allowed to be posted there. :(

But you CAN post it here: http://community.livejournal.com/akame_het/

I'd appreciate you posting it over there! Share the love with the other Akame_Het fans.

See you there!
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on February 9th, 2010 08:45 am (UTC)
thankies~ for reading.commenting. and saying that my fic isn't allowed at akame_ comm. thankies so much..
and.. you've noticed it? i mean the britney thing? ^^
at first jin's girlfirend there is britney, then i changed it to "maki" i didn't notice that though, btw, thanks again^^
can i post this fic to the comm. you recommend me? ^^
(no subject) - mastrmanipul8r on February 9th, 2010 05:23 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - bakanishi08 on February 10th, 2010 02:13 am (UTC) (Expand)
mikhaella23mikhaella23 on February 9th, 2010 04:04 am (UTC)
sweet~! it's cute...

p.s. filipina k rin? add kta...hope you don't mind...
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on February 10th, 2010 02:28 am (UTC)
thanks for reading..
yep ako'y isang masugid na pilipinang fan ng akame.
wahaha^^ go, ok, add mq, i'll add you back :)
red_turtle423red_turtle423 on February 9th, 2010 11:12 am (UTC)
LOVE it...it so sweet..^-^\/
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on February 10th, 2010 02:29 am (UTC)
thanks for reading and commenting^^
yunizhamasakiyunizhamasaki on February 9th, 2010 03:03 pm (UTC)
thanks for the fic
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on February 10th, 2010 02:29 am (UTC)
you're welcome^^
Yuuri or Riri or Ri. Whichever is fine :Dyuuri_kute246 on August 24th, 2010 11:00 am (UTC)
Taylor Swift is my biggest love. And "You belong with me" is also one of my favourite songs. And I had never thought of it being "adapted" into an Akame fic. And I had never thought that it would be this cute and awesome. And thanks for writing this ! ^__________^