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15 April 2009 @ 09:40 am
[fic] beginning a new life with you chapter 1  
.TITLE : beginning a new life with you
PAIRING: reader(YOU!) x jin akanishi
Disclaimer:i own jin. not. and of course this crazy plot^^(peace)
SUMMARY: you are a cafe attendant,,,living together with your bestfriend  in your apartment, decided to enroll to a school.. studying + working is hard for you.. how will be your life remains the same if you found the "love" that your waiting for many years was just on your side?(just read it..hehe i don't know how to explain the summary^^)


you sigh, you just can't sllep because of you're excitement.."yatta~! (friend's name) will be able to come here to japan!!! hahaha!! i will bake cake for her..!" you told to yourself while jumping happilly on your bed..
ringg~ ringgg~ your phone rings..you pick it up...

-phone conversation-

you: hello? who's this?
(friend's name): it's me~! (friend's name)-chan...can you please open the door...
you: oohh..haha.. your funny huh? then why? why should i?
(friend's name): haha. i'm here in the front of your apartment...just open the door!
you: really? really?

you didn't hang up the phone but you just left it on your table.
"(ur name) where are you! still on the line?!" your friend asks..no one answers...
"she's a total jerk!" you whispered as you jump up and down while opening your front gate..
"(friend's name)~! i thaught you'll be here tommorow?!! you must give me a call while you're in the airport so that i can ~"
you realized that no one's around...you look around and found a  luggage...your heart beats fast...
your knees are trembling..then someone behind you covered your eyes with it's hand...
you tried to push it away..
then someone laughs very loud..
you recgnized her voice..
"you! you! baka! bakero! you've scared me! a lot!" you said.
"hahaha..gommen ne, i didn't mean to scare you..haha.." your friend said
you rushed to her and hug her very tight. "i really miss..miss you!!!"
"me too! it's been a while ne.." she reply
"a while? it's 5 years since we've met since were just 13..." you said
"is it long? haha" she reply
"ok then..let's go inside before mosquitos eat us.."
"eat us?! baka."

the two of you entered your apartment happily...
you put her luggage to the room next to your room.
"your apartment was awesome! i really like to be here!" your friend said
"feel at home here..everythings mine is everything yours too..feel free^^" you told her
you hold her hand and bring her to your kitchen.
"sit down, i know that you're not yet eating..so..i'll give you squid sushi.." you said
"squid sushi ne..? haha.it's still you're favorite.."she said.

u give her the squid sushi and a melon drink.
"do you enjoy living here in japan?" she asks
"not actually,i don't have my own house, i need to work for myself,even though my parents are against this at least they give me some allowance for one whole month..,ano..i don't have a car,i don't have many friends like i have on our hometown.
and last thing, I DON"T HAVE "SOMEONE" who will love me on what i am now.." you explained.
"but you're really lucky to have a friend like me ne?haha ehh,but don't count things you don't have..count the blessings you have now..just see,look around,you have a home to live comfortably..a very wide home,you have friends and you have job" your friend reply.
"seems like you've change a lot ne.hehe..i'm still waiting for the job confirmation..on a cafe..i hope they will hire me..because it's my last choice..but the wrong about that cafe is..somehow different.."you said to your friend while drinking melon juice.
"somehow different?"your friend asks.
"haii.different..really different..it's a cosplay cafe..you need to wear costume before serving the clients. you're the one who fits to that job..."you explained.
"oh.haha me??uhmm,.i like cosplay and anime..but are you saying that the job doesn't fits you?! you're the kawaiiest person i've ever met..it does fit you..really.,"she replied.
"thanks for your compliment.,or just kidding?! haha. wanna come with me tommorow? we'll sent your application so that were in the same cafe with same job!!"you exclaimed.
"oh..haha ok.it'll be great, there will be cute guys there deshou?!" your friend said.
"haha,haii, not at all i think..there's a school near there maybe i'll enroll there when i already have enough money...wanna enroll too?"you questioned.
"of course..haha." she replied.
you look on the clock and recognize that it's already 11:49pm. so the two of you decided to go to sleep together in your room.
"good night my best best friend." your friend tells you and hugged you.
"oyasumi~" you said to her and hugged her too.


tommorow morning...

"ready?" you said to your friend.
"set, go!" your friend exclaimed.
you quickly fix your bed, brush your teeth, cook your own breakfast, take a bath, wear your favorite dress, fix your hair,
"hahaha..i won!"you told to your friend. "your a jerk..i don't even know your house yet." your friend told you.
"no excuses.. may i have my 500 yen now?!" you said. "500? that's too much! ok..ok..here."she said annoyingly while giving 500 yen to you.
while exiting your house...

you said: "ready...set.."
"matte..!matte kudasai..! i don't know this place yet.."your friend complaint.
"oh..haha..then prepared your 500 yen ne,"you reply
"youre such a baka..haha..after i memorized this place..just..you're the one who'll give me 500 yen"she threatened.
"oh..haha..let's see."you replied.

the two of you arrived on the front of the cafe...
you give your friend's application form to the manager of the cafe.
"are you (name)?" the manager ask.
"yes i am,and this is my friend,(friend's name).it's nice to meet you."you said.
"well it's also nice meeting you.you two are hired now."the manager said.

you and your friend was very happy.
the manager taught you how to prepare,to serve,..
shows you the costume to be used (the costume is animals. a pig, a turtle, a cat..and many more.)
you'll gonna wear the cat costume while your friend's costum is turtle..
the two of you are very happy that day.
you and your friend's gonna start tomorrow.
you decided to treat her on that cafe.
"this is funny~ eating here? we're attendants here~!"your friend said.
"we're just customers today,we will be attwendants tomorrow ok?" you replied
"ok..ok..seems you just gave my 500 yen back to me ne? by the way thanks for this,"(friend's name) said.
"dou itashimashite..^^"you replied.


tomorrow morning...
"oh,tell me what is your phone number..."you requested to your friend.
"ok..i'll dictate it to you.. -----"your friend told.
"haii,"(she's dictating while your writing it down to your mini booket.)
"let's go."she said. you just nodded and put on your jacket.

...on the cafe..
you and your friend asks the manager for your schedules..
then you started working..you wear your kawaii neko costume..
"welcome~! please come in"you said as you take the customers the the tables.

..on the other hand..
"yatta,, it's 4pm, could we go to the cosplay cafe?" taguchi said.
"of course! i will~!" koki said. "deal.." ueda said.
"there will be lot of cakes and pastries there right?! i must go~!" nakamaru said as he jump up and down.
"and there will be kawaii girls of course,,*blink*" kame said.
all of them stared at jin and koki asks "come'on don't over react.."
"i don't like cosplay cafes don't count me in.." jin said.
all of them hold jin tightly as they arrived to the cafe.


this is my very first fic so, everyone can throw tomatoes on me T_T
just tell me if i'll continue writing this or not, it depends to you! onegai
the chapter two is more exciting^^
comments are loved! arigatou ne~!

♡i am♡: in jinjin's side
♡i am♡: cheerfulcheerful
♬♪i'm listening to♪♩: KAT-TUN - water dance
Freyakougazgurl on April 15th, 2009 02:10 am (UTC)
Please put this under an LJ cut. If you don't know what this is, go to the FAQ.
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on April 15th, 2009 02:14 am (UTC)
gommen ne, i'm just new here
Freyakougazgurl on April 15th, 2009 02:28 am (UTC)
It's fine, I was just saying, I was new here once, and when I didn't put it under a cut I got all these comments about, "Oh, you can't do this", "Post it right or don't post it", Yadda Yadda.

I'm doing this out of kindness. xD

But yeah, you can just go into the "Edit Post" link and click on the button with all the gray lines and the one gray line that looks like a heart meter thing, sorry if I explained it weird. xD
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on April 15th, 2009 02:39 am (UTC)
then could i repost it again??
Freyakougazgurl on April 16th, 2009 12:39 am (UTC)
I read this, it's really good! I really like the idea and the plot. The second person POV is very cool too. It really makes me want to write/live something like this.

Also, this is so cute! The fact that KT-TUN had to drag Jin to the cafe is adorable.
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on April 15th, 2009 02:42 am (UTC)
i see the one your talking about, the lj cut?
really gommen ne,
what should i type to it then?
Freyakougazgurl on April 15th, 2009 07:21 pm (UTC)
You can just type, "Click here" or the title of the series. Anything you want, really, there's nothing wrong.
yshkn_miharuyshkn_miharu on April 15th, 2009 03:47 am (UTC)
nice fic.. waiting to read the chapter 2~ ^_^
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on April 15th, 2009 06:53 am (UTC)
haii^^arigatou you like it^^it's my first fic so...there will be many mistakes^^arigatou again^^
yshkn_miharuyshkn_miharu on April 15th, 2009 09:33 am (UTC)
daijoubu~ganbatte ne!! *\(^o^)/*
kitsune_09: jin!yamashita_pink on April 15th, 2009 02:15 pm (UTC)
^^ nice story...
can't wait for chapter 2... :D ^^ :)
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on April 16th, 2009 09:34 am (UTC)
jinstrickenpigjinstrickenpig on April 15th, 2009 02:22 pm (UTC)
mukyaaaaaaations to the maximum level!!!!!! ahahaha... i was having a lot of fun reading this... i've been waiting for this kind of fic for ages!!!!! it just gave me the kind of imagination i needed as a fan... domo arigatou,thank you for sharing!!!! love you for this... please do continue, i would like to know the continuation of "OUR" love story... Mukyaaaa!!! super dokidokiation!!!!! *flails* *reads again*
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on April 16th, 2009 09:35 am (UTC)
doumo^^! thanks for reading^^ i'm doing chapter 2 now^^
Wonka-chan~.~high5_for_akame on April 15th, 2009 09:24 pm (UTC)
for me it is a little very tiring to read these style

I am in blur right now I try to understand the thing that you try to spin for the plot....

you should try reading more fiction preferable by native English writers... so you can see and adopt a style that can fit more for a decent read...

I am not saying I don't like it but it's gets a little dizzy after some time... and I am used with hard core native fics :))=))

I will be stalking you for more updates and you should try to find a beta reader... they can do guide you:)):))
Wonka-chan~.~high5_for_akame on April 15th, 2009 09:24 pm (UTC)
really don't hate me
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on April 16th, 2009 09:35 am (UTC)
it's ok^^gommen ne, maybe because i don't have any close friend here yet^^
Nadeshikodreamwatcher15 on April 15th, 2009 09:45 pm (UTC)
Hahahaha, I really like this idea! <3
It's funny reading it and imagining to be in the story! XD
So please continue. *eats the tomatoes* (would be a waste to throw them at you! XP)

bakanishi08bakanishi08 on April 16th, 2009 09:36 am (UTC)
haha XD arigatou ne^^
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on April 16th, 2009 12:01 pm (UTC)
chapter 2 in on now! hihi
Kex be the AWSM-est, desu yo~: junno ♥airkiss17 on April 16th, 2009 02:19 pm (UTC)
nice fic! ^^
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on April 17th, 2009 06:58 am (UTC)
bumwehbumweh on April 22nd, 2009 06:19 am (UTC)
nice fict!
blesyeecute028 on June 1st, 2009 02:52 am (UTC)
Subarashii fic!!!!
Nice fic!!! I'll definitely read the next chapters...
Gambatte ne!!! :)
talkativehandstalkativehands on June 3rd, 2009 06:50 am (UTC)
hey, its nice but you can leave more paragraphs for each "speech" get it? because it is kinda hard to read it if you clump all of them together. Pverall, it is good ne?
Shanty_BBshanty_bb on June 17th, 2009 08:35 am (UTC)
nice fic!! i like it!!
bakanishi08bakanishi08 on June 17th, 2009 11:02 am (UTC)
thanks ^___^
Kathleenleenkath16 on July 12th, 2009 02:41 am (UTC)
that was funny. ;p
jin don't like cosplays ne? lol